An emotional representation of the human experience of betrayal and abandonment - Eve Hamilton (unpublished poem)

I am pleased to review a poem by Eve, the narrator of Volume 2 of my book.

Her work is unpublished, so I will avoid copying the text here and place in the title what I think is the essence of her poem in a single line.

However, I will provide a link in this comment when and if the poem will be available online.

Rating: 5/5

This poem delves into the universal themes of betrayal and loss, weaving them into the narrative of an abused and neglected horse. This horse, a poignant metaphor for the soul, vividly embodies the pain and suffering of individuals who have been betrayed and abandoned by their loved ones. Its emotional journey, from hope to despair, resonates deeply with the reader, drawing them into its world of anguish and resilience.

The story of the horse is a powerful portrait of the pain and suffering of individuals whose trust has been abandoned, betrayed, or abandoned. The vivid description of the physical and emotional suffering of the horse lies with those who have encountered its experiences of abuse and abandonment. 

The author's use of the first-person narrative creates a strong connection between the reader and the metaphorical horse, creating a deeper emotional connection in the lines "I've worked so hard, I've trotted for miles, my feet are sore" and "I thought they loved us, so why are we here?" They evoke empathy and understanding as readers see the parallels between the horse's experiences and their own. 

The execution pen is a metaphor for the terrible and hopeless situations in which individuals are betrayed or abandoned. The other animals in the execution pen symbolise their shared experiences, constructing separate injustices and emphasising that prevalence. The horse’s shattered dream of a peaceful retreat to greener pastures represents the lost hopes and aspirations of those whose lives have been enriched by the actions of others. 

The final line, "The kill pen will be our last ever sound," is a haunting and powerful statement about the terrible and irreversible consequences of betrayal and abandonment. 

Throughout the poem, the author skilfully uses literary devices such as repetition, emotional detail, and rhetorical questions to enhance the emotional impact and build allegorical meaning, emphasised in the story of the horse.

In conclusion, this poem is a masterful exploration of the human experience. By narrating the tale of an abandoned horse, the author crafts a poignant and universally resonant commentary on betrayal, loss, and the indomitable spirit of humanity in the face of suffering. The poem’s emotional depth, vivid imagery, and inspirational message make it a truly outstanding and unforgettable work of art, one that leaves a lasting impression on the reader's heart and mind.